I need Your Opinion on this video?

please check out this video, it's me playing a piece... please tell me what u think.. and tell me how it could be improved.
http://youtube.com/watch?v=VjN3NSE5QHs

I've been trying to figure out a way of commenting on ur answers. Now i know how, well i didnt write this, it's for a composer called stephen heller as written in the begining of the movie. Yet am just a pianist trying to improve my playing through ur advice guyz.

On the whole, very, very good. But, the quality of recording and/or reproduction - don't know for sure which, might be both - leaves an awful lot to be desired.

One of your above responders presumed that you were the composer; but I didn't get that from a re-reading of your question. Are you? Please clarify this in "Add Details".

If the sound one hears from what you posted, is fairly close to reality, then you really need to perform on a much better instrument. No offense, but the sound is really pretty terrible.

You don't state your age, education, how long you have studied and/or how long you have been playing. Could you clarify this too please?

But aside from my above comments, you do have a definite talent for the piano: keep at it.

Good luck,

Wotan

Thank you for choosing my answer as best. And although you do need practice, you are already a good pianist. Do you utilize the HERTZ practice book? If not, you should get it. Good luck. Wotan Report It

noo i dont... am at a conservatory for music.. and i need this piece for a competition am takin part in. Report It

It's really perfect.But if you want improve it,you can make a band with more music instruments.

The piece sounds interesting but I think you should get a really good pianist to play it. It sounds like it might be too demanding for you technically (even though you wrote it)
At times, it sounded as if you were struggling with it.

Pretty good. The rhythm is ragged in spots. A little metronome practice could fix that. Also, your piano needs tuning in the treble.

One of the other respondents got the idea that you wrote the composition, but didn't the titles say "Heller"? Is that Stephen Heller? I think that was good work for Stephen Heller; I usually don't think much of Stephen Heller's compositions.

Your piano needs tuning.

Did you write that? You played it well, but not perfectly. The best thing you can do is improve the quality of recording which sounded very fuzzy to me.