hi. i just love to hear comments on the songs that i wrote and i'm wondering if you can check this out:
http://soundclick.com/share?songid=58907... the song is entitled "Game Over".
Chorus:
I must admit that I'd been lonely for some time after you left.
But that's over now.
You're just a part of my past, a part of my past, a part of my past.
So get away, move away.
I don't need you here anyway. totally awesome man, keep it up!!!! , i played it like 3 times, :P nice lyrics work on the voice a little (sorry just being honest! ) |