Please say something?

can you please check this song that i wrote?
http://buhayoneliner.blogspot.com/2007/1...

it's entitled "until forever".

chorus:
Until forever, we'll be together.
Let our minds and hearts be one.
Until forever, we'll be together.
Let our minds and hearts be one.

thank you in advance.

again, a really good song, seriously consider becoming a lyricist.

hi

sounds great, i like it

'something'

Now I said 'something', do appreciate me

I really like the lyrics ^^ they're fantastic.

*something* lol love your song btw, the words are beautiful! :)

lyrics are good... not bad... keep it up! :p