Ha me and my friend are gonna try to rap but we need a beat..?

is your rap better than this?

Here鈥檚 this fascinating nerd activating words simulating herds
Of how I deserve this status at it鈥檚 baddest integrating things absurd
A four point o student who store hardcore facts, know it all who鈥檚 fluent
At his flow not prudent though cause he says some weird stuff in a rude extent
I鈥檓 an intellect who goes in to wreck with girls I have no perception
Cause I begin to erect a conception that disconnects my common sensing鈥?br> I begin to stutter can鈥檛 utter I mutter sounds my brain begins to clutter
Cause I wonder if my blunders went me under the gutter
And then were my smartness people heart this they regard with
Appreciation of my hard steps of mentalness but I have retardness
Physically, is it to be hard for me to do p.e you see my body鈥檚 a gimmick
My muscles are sick a girls licks me quickly with one lick, I can鈥檛 seem to hit it
Can鈥檛 run fast, my body aint aerodynamically like a arrow or rabbit see
I鈥檓 slow, my pace erratically panic me cause a fat girl came passing me
Also I can鈥檛 do swimming, I鈥檓 jibbing, my efforts I鈥檓 giving it all oddly
I didn鈥檛 move I wish a good riddance of the pool but I鈥檓 living in Hawaii
I鈥檓 also a video game freak, I鈥檓 a lame geek who plays week or centuries