Can't write!!?

I am trying to write a good pop rock christmas song like aly and aj but i can't! I need help! when i try it ends up sappy!! I don't know how i am to get it good!

Also people please don't post rude comments i will just report it because it is mean and i will NOT give up no matter what!

talk a walk and see the winter scenery and christmas decor
jot down words that come to ur mind when u see it
use this inspirationa and write a song :)

You need a partner to bounce it off of. Put up the lyrics and let us do the rest.

well try to think of something that you like
it might give you some inpiration

cool can u put the lyrics up.
maybe i can help

refer to other christmas songs, and maybe you can use one or two lyrics in each song to make your own.

whatever you do DON'T PUT UP THE LYRICS! *unlike the first answerer* someone will try to steal them, show them to your best friend or something and have them melp

change some words from their song and try HARDER NEVER GIVE UP!

write about like something that no one has touched on a christmas song dare to be different

do you know how many songs never would have become hits if someone read just the lyrics? Most lyrics are not poems and most lyrics would fall flat on their face without the music.

Ease up and chill out. Do you have music? Or are you writting words to an existing melody? Sit and look out a window if you have snow outside. Or sit by a fireplace or in front of a Christmas tree. In other words, get into the mood. Songs happen. Rarely are they "made".

Once you are in the right frame of mind I think it will happen. You need to stop trying so hard.

Well you see I am saying ask someone to help.When I wanted to write a song I asked a partner and we did it together.Lots of people said we did great.

You should just give up because thats a sign that you have no talent! Hahahaha!! Only a few are talented in song writing. Obviously you are not just give up!

you know what i do I just sing a random song that I made up out like christmas. For example here is the beat sap and pause sap and pause with your fingers now the words. " Merry little Christmas too you I hope you discover somethinnnnnn new" now do that 2x. "Snow around hot chocolate in would if you know I became your friend. Merry little Chrismas Yeah Yeah. and add more words

start with a chord progression. the rest will come.