I wrote this for my ex...?

its pretty rough but i hope it gets my point across...

Someday,
when i'm rich and famous
i'll be in L.A.
and you'll wish
you were kissing my ***

and Lately,
i've been feeling pretty down
but looking at old pictures
i imagine watching you drown

Oo Baby,
i gotta find somone new
not another loser
not someone thats just like you

So today,
while i'm writing you this song
i hope that you will here it
and maybe you'll think of me
when you're choking on your bong




its a work in progress.

in reference to choking on the bong...he wouldnt literally be choking on the bong...
and yeah its probably a rock/pop song

Haha i like it

EDIT: Creeper, stop trolling

humorous.

is it a pop/rock song?

I don't like it in my personal opinion.

hmm . . . i've never heard of someone choking on a bong.

haha love the "choking on your bong" i've wanted many of my ex's to do the same!!

Hey with some heavy sound guitar with lots of grit ans some killer bass and drums and a bit more work on the lyrics it could be a classic.