Do you like my poem?

jubilation
the dance and wine
their screams and shouts
once so divine
rude and reckless
they turn the wheel
of fate and future,thought their views concealed
hesitation hinders
and takes it toll
swaying and falling with no control
the avalanche of no future
fading into aimlessness
the foundation of whole mankind
crumble to the point of no return

Cool~ how u do that? Y don't u just make it as a lyric?let me sing.Is that 2 sexy n lewd?

I love it! Its really good.

no

that's amazing :)

I likeee.

truthfully....i like it....especially because u were good with making good rhymes and making sure it doesnt sound like ur reaching too hard for a rhyme...im actually taking a creative writing class right now so i have been doing a lot of poems and stories and stuff..i like yours..it flows really well.... :)

im not gunna lie, thats a pretty fu*kin rad poem!
keep up w/ the gnarly work man!