Im singing this song for talent show how can i improve it !!!!!!!?

Sorry for the swearing and me going bit crazy i love this song but i need to improve it . How can i ??????

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NDbNb34fH...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ai8eooEBJ...

or this one ?

hey you've got a nice voice in these videos but the only problem is that theres no feeling in these song when your singing them, feel what the song is about and try it again

try it like you did when you did this video

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S1Sf15a2Z...

when i listened to this song when you were singing it, it was so lovely and passionate

good luck hun

maybe you just suck and can't improve it ok my maybe your voice can't take tht tone.

Have very energetic dancers around you then no-one will notice if you make a small mistake.

that was very good, well done. And very pretty too!

your very good and your very pretty.the one thing you should work on is getting signed by a record label.good luck hope to see ya on t.v one day

Just practice on this hard parts until it improves a bit and keep on doing it :]

You my dear are Fantastic! Absolutely beautiful!

wow ur really good and pretty too i think its perfect your pitch and tone are perfect u have a great voice

they put some crap on youtube don't they...sorry didnt see you there!!!!!

Stand UP! Your voice is good, throw a little more passion into it! Hair, clothes, all good. Background ....not good. Can you do this outside? Stop looking at whatever it is that you are loojing at and look straight into the camera, make love to the camera, feel the music and just let go...and stand up, better for the vocals,

I think you're really good in both songs :) and I can't think of any ways that you could improve. Good luck at the talent show!!

I dont think your voice suits "Everything I do" - it's not an easy song to sing. Have listen to some of the others you sing and I think they are much better. You obviously have lots of confidence - there's not many would do this! Good luck with what you are doing - but try something more suitable - a bit more "folky" suits your voice.

i actually liked "Behind these hazel eyes" more . it sounds more like less falsetto for you . it was beautiful. more exciting.

Not my preference of singing style, but nevertheless it was beautiful. Try to put more sentiment into your voice, as if you are really trying to communicate the emotion in this song to your lover.

Your very good =) No improving!