You say you love me and want to be with me
My love is stronger then ever
I am young and I don鈥檛 know this feeling
I wonder what is loves meaning
Every one says it鈥檚 just an illusion
But now its all just confusion
How do I feel?
What we do is no one business
And things are rushing
What is this feeling I have inside?
Could it be your just playing with my heart?
I am new to this and I don鈥檛 have much experience
But I can鈥檛 imagine us apart
I would love to be in your arms
But I can鈥檛 handle it
I might go too far and regret it
Would you think I am easy?
Would you look at me the same?
Would I have the wrong type of fame?
You say that you love me and won鈥檛 cause pain
Would you call me everyday and treat me the right way?
Tonight feels just right but I will be strong and hold on
Kissing me, touching me won鈥檛 convince me
I need to know that you love me
And I can鈥檛 breathe you make it harder for me to leave
My knees get weak and Well 4 starters. I think its good. But I have a question. What type of song is it? Country love R&B love rap love Techno Love Rock love What is it? When I read it, it feels like Rock and Country mixed together with love. I like it. she should make more and put it on myspace or you tube so the world can here it!!!! i think it asks to many questions It's not really a song, is it?
More of a poem I think.
But, I like it.
Kind of. ok its a good start.
i write songs myself. && the woman before is right, a song shouldnt ask so many questions.
but the few things i would change are:
--the many questions.
--"Every one says it鈥檚 just an illusion
But now its all just confusion"----illusion is something that isnt real thats seen or something that doesnt make sense. so is confusion. try not to use words of similar aspects.
but truthfully it sounds better as a poem than song because it doesnt have a solid "foundation" of a topic. its just mixed feelings.
but it is good! =] | 