AMERICAN IDOL........trying TO MAKE IT BIG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?

Hey I wrote this song, do you like it. THe music part of it is like not hard rock and not soft rock but inbwtween and its a girl lead singer. (i cant post on youtube so dont say that please!)
(-chours-)
I aint no princess to be saved
there anit no dragon to be slayed
boy, you aint living in no fanstay
baby
this is real life with me

aii yii ai oh yeha
yeaah this is real life with me

i m not waitin across a river waiting for you
and i am not wearing a glass slipper shoe
i m not intrested in a princess role
boy you gotta win me on your own

- chours -

i dont have a fairy godmother
and your no knight in shinning armor
I not going for a throne,
boy you gotta win me on your own

chours twice.

if you want me
come get me
your own way
cause i anit no princess to be saved

i dont live in a cottage full of drawfs,
i aint scrubin tables
or feedin your horse.

chours

well wat do ya think? please answer.

I love it!!! Can't wait to see you on American Idol!!

most of it is good. some lines "no slipper shoe" and the last verse (i don't live in a cottage...) need work though. it's definately got potential though!

that's actually really good. i like the concept of it. the one thing for me though is the line w/ the cottage. that needs a little work. but besides that, you did really good!!

That sucks! Maybe you should try disney, im sure twelve year olds everywhere would love it!

Way, way, WAY too amateur and cheesy.

American Idol won't be sending you to Hollywood any time soon.