Does anyone like this? It's my soap opera. Please read and state your honest opinion!?

Here's Part one of Tomorrow Sunsets.
Town: Sunrise Valley (made it up - but thatnks for the answers that you guys gave to me..... they helped me think up this one!)
Day 1: Tomorrow Sunsets
Monday
Laura: He鈥檚 really gone.

AJ: Mom, it鈥檚 okay.

Laura: No AJ, it鈥檚 not. My son is dead. Your brother.

AJ: Half brother actually.

Laura: Is this really a time to critique my every move? I want to succeed AJ, and I wanted Edward to too.

Seriously the dialog is trite even for soap writing. and it all ready sounds like very other soap on the air. Past time for something different

I didn'y quite get it

Ok no offense but i hate GENERAL HOSPITAL

You must be a GH fan? You might want to use different names.

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